2 thoughts on “Raan’s Doll – C01P28

  1. You do a phenomenal job of making dialogue realistic. You also flesh out your characters quite well. A lot of other content like this–say from SapphireFoxx, for example–has characters that feel wooden and interactions that are simply nonsensical, which kills the immersion into the story.

    Great work.

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